06-17-2013, 06:52 AM
Has the potential but you've made some weird design choices.
Why is there a random red part sticking out of the grey text? It doesn't improve the look.
Also, the part where the two words join could be smoothed out with the pen tool or an eraser.
You should only have one central highlight, too; it will look nicer than two highlights.
Overall it's a good idea, but it looks like you finished it, and then sat there and went 'Hm. I could add this to it...' and it just sort of made it worse than it could be.
Why is there a random red part sticking out of the grey text? It doesn't improve the look.
Also, the part where the two words join could be smoothed out with the pen tool or an eraser.
You should only have one central highlight, too; it will look nicer than two highlights.
Overall it's a good idea, but it looks like you finished it, and then sat there and went 'Hm. I could add this to it...' and it just sort of made it worse than it could be.